For a woman who had won so many respect all over the world, she's a well know woman who knows the business of this world. on her talk show, that has real reason's, young and old people's life she is know to break down all barriers and open the mind, soul, and heart of those she encounter with. Oprah Winfrey is a roll model to many young women, me being one of them. ms Winfrey coming from a bad childhood made something out of her life. at 55, she's wonderful, beautiful and still growing strong. for all her strength and love of the world and respect I've fallen under her spell of being one of her fans.
Most of my days when i feeling Am not getting enough has much has i put out i always though of a life where i want to be some one. I've fantasy about being a superhero---because of the powers they process to do things normal humans can't. Or Brenda Jackson, my favorite author. she as a wonderful life meeting the man who was destiny at (fifteen)to be with her for life and making babies together. having some one there who she loves and who loves her back, being a African-American romance author she has charmed the heart of many readers. me wanting to be a romance author, and she already being a famous author make me want to be like her.
Doing the stuff i love makes my happy: hanging with my friends, reading books i love, dancing singing, and watching thing that makes my happy. all these thing makes me feel away i can't put into words.
Dying. three of my family member's has die so far since i've been a live. at just two months old, Brandon Jones, died. then came my bestfriend/cousin, Moshele ''Shelly'' Fergon. she had died a young beautiful woman. the day she died just a few weeks after my birthday was the day the world became a place,i would love to hate. but has time grow back i became to love and lived again. My grand-father(wasn't by birth) died but like me and other's quess it was time for him to go. i accpet that. it's been years now since all three had died but in my heart i would always love and respect them. sad ending makes me sad, i hate it when something i want to make happen doesn't come out that way along with death.
Afraid of losing ,life, have more family members being taken a way from me, afraid of not doing well, not getting what i want in life. am afraid of what would come of the out work, in the near future.
fear influence my work that i want to be, if i keep telling myself i won't be able to do what i want in life. i always tell myself i can't do it and when i think that way my head comes up with a million reasons why i can't do it.
my biggest challenge in life is going through surgeries. i have another to do next week Tuesday and i hope like the first two i will come out on top of being well in my game of being alive again.
"O, God no. i don't want to", my face will be cover with shock then my heart start beating even faster then,i would cry if it's something i can't handle. those of what i fear and hate but other people have it worse. still i can't help it or control my emotions about any and everything that may happen to me.
a year from now I'll be the new improve girl, i will change: i will start and finish everything i do, because i'm a Gotham Academy student's .
Most of my days when i feeling Am not getting enough has much has i put out i always though of a life where i want to be some one. I've fantasy about being a superhero---because of the powers they process to do things normal humans can't. Or Brenda Jackson, my favorite author. she as a wonderful life meeting the man who was destiny at (fifteen)to be with her for life and making babies together. having some one there who she loves and who loves her back, being a African-American romance author she has charmed the heart of many readers. me wanting to be a romance author, and she already being a famous author make me want to be like her.
Doing the stuff i love makes my happy: hanging with my friends, reading books i love, dancing singing, and watching thing that makes my happy. all these thing makes me feel away i can't put into words.
Dying. three of my family member's has die so far since i've been a live. at just two months old, Brandon Jones, died. then came my bestfriend/cousin, Moshele ''Shelly'' Fergon. she had died a young beautiful woman. the day she died just a few weeks after my birthday was the day the world became a place,i would love to hate. but has time grow back i became to love and lived again. My grand-father(wasn't by birth) died but like me and other's quess it was time for him to go. i accpet that. it's been years now since all three had died but in my heart i would always love and respect them. sad ending makes me sad, i hate it when something i want to make happen doesn't come out that way along with death.
Afraid of losing ,life, have more family members being taken a way from me, afraid of not doing well, not getting what i want in life. am afraid of what would come of the out work, in the near future.
fear influence my work that i want to be, if i keep telling myself i won't be able to do what i want in life. i always tell myself i can't do it and when i think that way my head comes up with a million reasons why i can't do it.
my biggest challenge in life is going through surgeries. i have another to do next week Tuesday and i hope like the first two i will come out on top of being well in my game of being alive again.
"O, God no. i don't want to", my face will be cover with shock then my heart start beating even faster then,i would cry if it's something i can't handle. those of what i fear and hate but other people have it worse. still i can't help it or control my emotions about any and everything that may happen to me.
a year from now I'll be the new improve girl, i will change: i will start and finish everything i do, because i'm a Gotham Academy student's .
I THINK YOU SHOULD FINISH OR EXTEND YOUR SENTENCES, LIKE THE 1ST ONE, YOU SAID RETALIA THOMPSON IS MY NAME AND THEN ENDED YOUR SENTENCE. I THINK YOU SHOULD READ OVER YOUR WORK AFTER WRITING IT BECAUSE THERES A COUPLE OF MISTAKES. I THINK YOU HAVE EXCELLENCE POINTS, AND YOUR A GOOD WRITER BESIDERS THE COUPLE OF MISTAKES YOU HAVE.
ReplyDeletethis is a good essay but some typos. This couldnt get any longer. try adding on to sentences
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